Spool Five

Concrete

Today’s prompt was an interesting one. It was to write a ‘concrete’ poem - a poem that has its own shape/form. Like this poem or this one.

Here are my attempts (plural). The second one was supposed to be some kind of vase or bottle.


It was
just a
piece
of art
but it provided a nice place
to sit                at any
 time                 of day



   it holds
     what-
     ever
   is placed
  inside of it
  so perfectly
 not unlike the
 gentle way you
  held my hand

Thu Apr 28, 2022 - 85 Words